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Leah McFall's avatar

I absolutely love how open you are to it all. All of it. Gorgeous post, Dan

Dan Keane's avatar

Aw thanks, Leah!! Glad you dig it!

MelissaKeane's avatar

Oh. My. I know that night, that stillness. You have written it down. Thank you.

Dan Keane's avatar

Yeah, I just can't get past it. Don't want to. And you'll see it--hear it--or *not* hear it--again soon!

Zach Dodson's avatar

Watchman, what of the night?

Dan Keane's avatar

Danggg that's a better title

Brad Weekly's avatar

I know from what you speak, brother. The Southern Cross; the Westerly, the Northerly, and please God no Southerly now. It's Summer after all.

It ain't Summer here in Seattle, but I'll take it because family is here. 7:05 AM and if my window was open I would hear the constant - for real - drone of vehicles of every size, shape, purpose and intent rolling North or South on the I-5 FREEWAY. I'll take Highway 2 every time - and I'll see you in January.

Tena koe, Mate ✊🙂

Dan Keane's avatar

I-5, the ghost of the coast!! It's I-10 that haunts my dreams (though the one cited above is just the Loop 101 on the Tempe/Mesa line.) There's affection in the numbers, I think. I don't miss the noise, but I can't quite hate it?? Safe travels man, see you on the other side!

Brad Weekly's avatar

ASU has smashed Iowa State. The once-Pac12 is now dominating their new conferences. :)

The Lighthousekeeper's Muse's avatar

That's really beautiful and evocative. If I get up during the night I often step outside to hear the sea - and from which direction I hear it. The sound doesn't always come from where it should! I might have to check out bird bedtime here tonight too.

Dan Keane's avatar

Ah, ocean noise!! That's a whole other deal, of which I know zip. Haunting in all the right ways, I imagine!

AGB's avatar

Great post. Great habit to have. My nightly pop-out lasts as long as it takes me to drink a mug of hot water. Usually that water is cold by the time I've soaked up enough serenity, stars, peace and morepork song, to unwillingly extract myself from.

Dan Keane's avatar

Love this, thanks! I learned to drink hot water in China, where it cures whatever ails you, including a cold apartment. Have lost the habit here a bit, must try it of an evening!

John Keane's avatar

Yep. Beautiful.

Dan Keane's avatar

Thanks! Love to y'all in winter!

Rachel Shenk's avatar

With you on this one.

Dan Keane's avatar

We'll start a whole substack vibe just for quiet nights at home. 'Yes, this'

Caryl Forrest's avatar

So evocative.

Dan Keane's avatar

Thanks, Caryl!

Max's avatar

Great read as usual Dan. A poet may not care for reasons but i find many in your prose.

Dan Keane's avatar

Thanks Max, that made my day! Whatever you find, you can keep, and let me know so I can catch em myself

Jane Bloomfield's avatar

Glorious! I live high above the Shotover River and some nights I stand outside brushing my teeth and stop still because the river is with me babbling and gurgling right under my feet. Very special. Tried to write a poem about it once lol!

Dan Keane's avatar

Thanks, Jane! Love the image. Not yet seen the Shotover myself. Lucky you are, to be in toothbrushing range. The poem's still there, y'know. It'll wait for you. When you write it, you gotta send me a copy!

Jane Bloomfield's avatar

Hey Dan, I wrote the river in my ear poem. It's an image file so don't know how to share it? Not that it's going to change your life or anything!! Happy New Year!

Dan Keane's avatar

Wonderful! Yes please. I'll send you a DM

Jane Bloomfield's avatar

Ha will do! I’m above a flat reserve (not the canyons) where the river is wide and shallow and shore birds nest precariously at this time of year - Banded dotterels, terns, wrybill and black-billed gulls.

Susan Elliot's avatar

So very lovely. Still sighing deeply over 'Time curled in a circle'

In Bluff you can still (albeit barely) read the famous (in Aotearoa) Sterling Road AA sign at 11pm on the longest day. Long days in December still seem disconcerting