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Simon Sweetman's avatar

So great to have you read this live, and now to get to read it —your voice still here through the different form. Such a great piece.

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Dan Keane's avatar

Thanks man! You learn everything about a piece reading it aloud, right? So much fun!

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Simon Sweetman's avatar

David Sedaris takes notes and makes live edits to his scripts as he’s reading — he trials everything before publication. Fascinating to watch him actually writing in the margins of his work on stage. Prob my favourite bit of seeing him read actually, the live editing.

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Dan Keane's avatar

Gutsy. But then he's David Sedaris. I make mental notes as a I go and forget half by the time I'm done.

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Mary McCallum's avatar

I loved hearing this read and it’s a terrific piece. As an immigrant myself I like your outsider’s eye on NZ ways. The whole chainsaw thing I’d never thought about although the tyranny of the lawnmower I have mulled over for many years …

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Dan Keane's avatar

Hi Mary! Thanks so much! Lovely to meet you. I enjoyed your poems--I meant to say the other night, the poem (or stanza?) that ended on the simple note of harvesting the olives, after all the madness before--that was a great moment. Stays with me.

I think as an outsider here I will never understand chainsaws the way my Kiwi mates do! Lawnmowers, yes. A suburban Phoenix boy here. We should have had desert but out there we were, pushing the mower around our little squares of lawn...

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Samara's avatar

I loved how specific this was (also personally love axes and chainsaws so always ready for a deep dive there) and how you used that as a way to describe life in NZ; a lovely window into a world!

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Dan Keane's avatar

Hi Samara! Glad you dug it! I am mostly befuddled by tools but NZ has taught me the peace of chopping wood every now and then. Not chainsaw ready, no sir. But my mates here are chainsaw people, and this feels enough somehow!

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Samara's avatar

I miss chopping wood every morning for my wood stove! it is peaceful indeed. and having mates with chainsaws seems like a good way to go (although I suspect one of these days one of them will convince you to give a chainsaw a whirl and you’ll be forever converted)

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Rosie Whinray's avatar

A traditional song about cutting down & cutting up trees from my friend Sammy... https://sammyleary.bandcamp.com/track/timber-2

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Dan Keane's avatar

Oh this is lovely. D'you think it's 'Timber, I want to go home' or 'Timber! I want to go home' ? As in, an address sung to a pile of cut wood, or an echo of the day's cutting work followed by a lament? Did they even shout 'timber' after cutting trees?

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Rosie Whinray's avatar

Sammy says: "I think in my mind it's like timber... (in a resigned sort of way)... I want to go home. Just fuckin timber... everywhere... whole life is timber sort of feel. Life of a bushman."

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tracie's avatar

Love this Dan!

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Dan Keane's avatar

Thanks for the inspiration! Waving Southward!

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